Things progress unnaturally rapidly through the course of 2 or 3 days. Secondly, the pace of the game feels extremely rushed. There are spelling and grammar errors all over the place, and some of the dialogue reads very awkwardly. First, this VN is in serious need of proofreading and editing.
The biggest flaws with the game’s story though are two things. Ashley is literally just the childhood friend and that’s just about it. I think Jenny and Valery’s stories are far more established than the rest of the girls. Most of the main girls have interesting backstories and engaging interactions with the MC (except Ashley). The changes in facial expressions are pretty minimal though. Everything from the character models, lighting, and posing are all extremely well done. There are quite a few things that need some polishing but it’s an alright story with mostly likeable characters. If the MC is like that guy from Alexandra, Adam, his bodyguard, cartel guys and probably half of the characters of the game would be dead already. He would find ways to disrupt Adam’s plan. And you still cant decide? Good lord! If the MC is Tremolo from BADIK he would definitely do something. Dude! You already know that the guy wants you dead, he had you kidnapped already, insulted your father who recently died, threatened your friends, your lovedones everybody you care about. He needs to hangout with his guy friends so he can grow some fucking balls! Man the fuck up dude! What’s the matter with you?! Killing Adam is probably the only thing that can save his character but he still cant decide. The man can’t decide for himself, he always have to rely on Jeny or Ashley. What I cannot tolerate is his indecisiveness. I can overlook his big nose, karen haircut look or the fact that he’s an average joe, not the smartest, not the funniest, and definitely not a bad ass dude. The story also interest me a lot, like I said, I have no problem with that, i like emotional moments but it felt like there is only that but nothing else.Ī really evil antagonist and a really lame protagonist what could go wrong? Ugh! Don’t get me wrong, I enjoy the whole drama and all but damn the MC is such a huge dissapointment. I pity and feel sad for Valery(R) but somehow she doesn’t interest me. Rebecca doesn’t trigger my romantic side but see her rather just a nice and kind friend. I didn’t expect to like Jade but she interest me more as times goes on. What I like is the characters are interesting, does not felt like archetype, but very unique. The author does very well, but it seems he ignore every other aspect of a story. The author seems to want to create a serious story and it felt like it pull you into the climax straight away while getting to know the girls at the same time. Even the class he takes seems to be separate. I cannot feel what is going on in the background, the MC seems to be isolated within the group of girls he know, no mentions of what is going on at the sch. I feel disconnected to the world setting. There are two main group and it felt like the girls are never separate, you always talk to them when the others is around, or to temporary get away 10 min before rejoining the group. With the previous point, it felt like there is no space to “breath”, in the story. there is no talking with other people etc. Every thing the MC did revolved around the girls, from the beginning he is drawn to the group and every single say he only does thing around them. There are no fun, joyful aspect to the sch life, seems like there is always this gloomy cloud over the girls, and conversation. From the start of the game we are drawn to the “heavy” backstory of the girls, thus setting the atmosphere, but it keep that way for a long long time. The emotional, sad heavy part of the girls seems to be continuous. However I feel that due to the developer extreme focus on this, it creates several weak aspect. Like you said it has good story, a bit heavy kind where instead of just sexy bodies, we have insight into their characters more. There are aspect that this game does well and doesn’t. I wanted to give some of my thoughts as well.
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